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[The Crazeh Incident]

the animation is short & without clear plot

tips - grenades usually need to have the pin removed to explode. Doing the motion of taking off the pin without actually showing the pin being removed and tossed isn't sufficient. Your explosion did indeed suck, and the only thing I can offer for advice towards improving is you should remember explosions tend to cause a quick burst of light (quickly fade to white screen and back is an option) then followed by the already going flames and smoke. Drawing squiggly red and yellow lines is also insufficient. Good luck with further animations. Compared to other "noob"s, you actually have potential.

Necro-Mage responds:

Thanx for some of the help, and about the flash being short without a clear plot. It was just supposed to be a short. But thanx for the compliments and help :)!

ill work on the explosion and the grenade pen flying.

[Snap Flame]

Sooooo

The a and g were suppose to move up and down when I blink right? If not, I failed. Although short and most-likely pointless to me, I enjoyed the way you put the whole thing together (except for that the easter egg was too easy to find.) The afikoman was pretty nifty and made me smile.

JSXSDawg responds:

Yea they move up and down. And I made it easy to find because I actually spent more time working on the Easter Egg than the actual clip.
Thanks for the positive response.

[Skittles N' Dickz]

Hmmmm

Robot Chicken actually didn't come to mind... although This is What You Want by Tomorrows-Nobody did.

Even if I hadn't seen and loved Tomorrows-Nobody's animation before this one, I still would have to call this sub-par. The transition-noise was too loud compared to voices and other sounds. Most jokes failed to be timed right and were not easily understood as they should be, and you could probably benefit from a spell-checker.

Emanhattan responds:

Im mexican so I have some issues with english pronunciation n stuff. my accent is not accurate.

and yeah a lot of folks complained about that damn noisy sound

[Superhero: SDO Day #25]

There's 26 letters in the alphabet

You forgot the letter Q!!! Piccolo then RadioActive man! WHERE'S Q-BERT?! or Quetzalcoatl?! or Quail Man?!

Chaz-o responds:

Well... After doing some extinsive research on the subject, I came to the conclusion that sense Q is the most unused letter of the alphabet there wouldnt be too many heroes that started with it. So I figured noone would notice if I skiped It.

In the longrun, it is in the best intrest of everyone.

[Arsenality Rpg Trailer.]

Don't forget a text and grammer revise and editor!

Because, Allso, Allways, and Gratefull all have only one l. Maybe that was on purpose but unless the viewer knows it's on purpose, it's just kind of annoying.

Akitta responds:

XD XD XD By bad....I just hurried with the texts...so I forgot to double check...thanks for the advices!

[Chinese New Year 2008]

Really enjoyable

The only thing that bothered me was the arms. They just seemed so long the way they were done during the chorus. The entire video was cute and thank you for sharing it with me and everyone else.

Kenzu responds:

And I thank you for your review!

[Nuclear Freddy 2]

5 effing days...

holy mofo, I wish I could do something so amazing in only 5 days. I applaud you on your top-notch talent and proficiency at flash animation. What could make this better? Nothing comes to mind. It has a small file size, excellent choice for music, fantastic animation, a preloader, and a replay button.

BritishMoose responds:

To be honest, the last two days I've been doing pretty much nothing else other than animating. I'm not sure how I managed to keep the file size so small...there are a lot of keyframes and 'raw' shapes in the .fla...oh well.

Thanks very much for the stupidly positive review, it means a lot to me :)

[FbF Attack]

...and then you're all like, whoa.

Constructive criticism: Ummm, let's see. Uhhh, make it less confusing? No wait, that would mean a plot or something, and I do not a plot to enjoy an animation! So forget what I just said. Good job and congratz.

Soupcat responds:

Haha, thanks man!
Yeah, a plot would be a bit usefull. But I didn't really feel like it. Sucks to us. Again, thanks for the review! Really appreciated =D

<3.