SeanAaron's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[School Stories episode 1]

hey

definitely not bad for 13 year olds. You should try out a voice changer software to make your voice deeper for adults instead of just trying to make you voice sound deep.

[Nuclear Freddy 2]

5 effing days...

holy mofo, I wish I could do something so amazing in only 5 days. I applaud you on your top-notch talent and proficiency at flash animation. What could make this better? Nothing comes to mind. It has a small file size, excellent choice for music, fantastic animation, a preloader, and a replay button.

BritishMoose responds:

To be honest, the last two days I've been doing pretty much nothing else other than animating. I'm not sure how I managed to keep the file size so small...there are a lot of keyframes and 'raw' shapes in the .fla...oh well.

Thanks very much for the stupidly positive review, it means a lot to me :)

[Frivolous Scrolls I: Ep.1]

Nice animation

I don't know how you could do this, but the jokes weren't *crisp* like the "but that WAS two days ago.* Maybe more of a pause and zoom and toned-down atmospheric noise, when he realizes and says it, would help emphasize the joke. I think I saw a few glitches with an emerald on a bracer randomly showing up and something in the credits possibly glitched but I didn't re-watch the animation to affirm this.

[Go USA]

needs a higher score

Anything with video of kids getting hurt deserves at least a 3 (school bus crash). Disclaimer: For it's rarity, not cause I'm a sick sob. Don't hurt kids. But yeah, totally funny to watch people get hurt by accident.

[Connections]

a drawing progression

I partially liked it. It didn't amaze me. Dunno. Maybe some color would have made the flash stronger, as well as little more length. To me it would seem more suitable on a video sharing site, but thanks for sharing it on newgrounds as well. Best of luck on future projects.

[Perpetual Limbo of Room]

Simply terrific

I can definitely see that you knew what you were doing when you made this. It's able to keep the viewer's attention and catch even the most seasoned viewer off guard with random guro and Conan. Only thing I would change is that at the end it just goes back to the load page without much warning. Whatever, a minor thing like that is quickly ignored when such a great animation precedes it.

[Bouncey]

So it's not as good

But for the small file size, it is a cute little animation and deserves props. 3 out of 5 props.

[Jim and Bob Episode 1]

I liked the animation

As for the humor and plot, I feel I've been deprived. Instead of slap-stick low grade humor, try some low grade shock humor or something. Or just whatever, I hope you the best in further episodes.

[FbF Attack]

...and then you're all like, whoa.

Constructive criticism: Ummm, let's see. Uhhh, make it less confusing? No wait, that would mean a plot or something, and I do not a plot to enjoy an animation! So forget what I just said. Good job and congratz.

Soupcat responds:

Haha, thanks man!
Yeah, a plot would be a bit usefull. But I didn't really feel like it. Sucks to us. Again, thanks for the review! Really appreciated =D

<3.

[Pizza & Friends]

Keep on schoolin

Work on the spelling and work on the timing in your jokes. When things come at you fast, they're a lot funnier. For example: (while falling from the cliff) instead of holding the I hate you sign the whole time, just have him wip it out for a second then put it away. Also, avoid shape-tweens. They're only good when people don't notice you used a shape-tween